interesting design. i think the flowing watery effect you have going there is nice, but it overwhelms part of the image. the part coming down from where his finger is pointing is nice, but the part on the right is a bit confusing to the eyes. also, id find myself wondering what kind of arrangement you could create with the flat part of each circle aligned along the same line, about 1/3 from the bottom of the image.
It gets a little too bright and indeed does overwhelm the image. Can you post the PSD file? Also, Pat White is in it...
I would remove the ejaculate from the image and go from there. What? I don't know what else to call it.
